Review Detail of Cestarian in Lucifer's Descendant System
Review detail
Poorly written, boring and full of grammar issues, don't waste your time on this... I read through 14 chapters of this, but it never really managed to grab me, so I just dropped it at that point. I couldn't bring myself to care about any of the characters (including the protagonist), they're all bad. There's a lot of just plain bad writing habits, like a lot of "the boy" "the man" "the teenager" "the girl", etc, gets super boring and repetitive to read after a short time and doesn't really add anything, I mean what's wrong with "he" and "she" anyways? World appears to be super generic monster invasion world, nothing special here. Plot progression is snailing, even by webnovel standards, 14 chapters and we're still basically at the 'introductions' stage of the story... I mean yeah, it's just plain bad man, I doubt a lot of people could enjoy reading this.
Lucifer's Descendant System
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The author of this novel is a 20-year-old Brazilian with a YouTube channel called "zy", he is around 20/21 years old and was exposed for exchanging nudes and spicy messages with A MINOR AGE (the girl was 14 years old) (an example of the messages "I am willing to make you cum using my voice, I will only stop when you are wet and full of cum, but for that you need to give me your little body are you willing to do that?" he is a sick pedophile who used his influence to harass minors, help us to report this account so that this bastard will never do that again
I think your review is premature but it is accurate. The first few chapters were good. I made it to 170 and it is all the same. The writing quality deteriorated drastically. The MC suffered sever INT drop in many situation to make the plot more "exciting" (ie doing stupid things that risk himself, his sister and all he has for some quick cash). Of course it started with the plot of "everyone powerful knows about him", and coming war, etc. The MC seems to be the only special there. He plays an online game (which has paid skins, etc) and he walks in the tournament and everyone goes retard, "omg its Lucifer". It makes it seems like he the only idiot that uses weird skins (devil) while everyone else look like normal humans, the worst part its not intentional from the author he just didnt bother describing anyone else (not even his team mates) so it seems like they all went with basic appearance, NO one else decides to look not human..... Novel over all, started fine, had potential and quickly wasted. I think it also has to do with the audience, I rarely see any criticism (constructive criticism) so there is little improvement (if any quality dropped). I won't be surprised if the first few chapters were written before released, have been mostly proofread and then new chapters. Its likely to do with the site audience, posing in different websites can give a better opinion.
actually, it has proof and prints, but it is all in Portuguese. His channel (that was featured in his previous description is named zy, search for ZY exposed on youtube and you will find a lot of videos tackling the subject.
OI_BADI:So the Author is Pedo? I NEED TO KNOW THE ANSWER
actually, it has proof and prints, but it is all in Portuguese. His channel (that was featured in his previous description is named zy, search for ZY exposed on youtube and you will find a lot of videos tackling the subject.
Ashborn0:Not really. no one is sure of it these people are the trolls that we find on internet....
DaoistRpGdPr:actually, it has proof and prints, but it is all in Portuguese. His channel (that was featured in his previous description is named zy, search for ZY exposed on youtube and you will find a lot of videos tackling the subject.