Review Detail of Cry_Maker in Lucifer's Descendant System
Review detail
I dropped it at chapter 39, it literally made no sense, how can noah be faster than someone who is faster than him??? Like how does that even work, although the author did a nice job explaining what was happening Story is full of cliche stuff, i can predict and understand what happens even if i try to skip words (which i didn t) I didn t like the characters at all, noah and his friend carlos feel weird to me, plus the ' 1 chapter antagonists" are one dimensional, as i said i can predict what they gonna do, it s so obvlious is stupid, the same with noah, smh Now idk about the update stability as i read this story today so i gave it 4 stars World background.. Well everyone take this as they want but i didn t rlly see world background in those chapters, just those fortress appeared, more planets, etc (i d just spoil if i were to explain) So now why i dropped it.. As i said above noah was faster than a boss who supposedly should be faster than him, like it really pissed me off reading that, how does it even work, his strenght is higher, his agility is higher, but he s slower? Also, the chapter before that, there was this scene (against the same monster) where bcs he defended in some strange way that the boss couldn t push him down at all despite using better weapons and 2 hands and noah using 1 hand with just a normal knife, i can t portrate that in my head, how does it even work?? If their strenght it s the same, no matter how he s defending, as long as it s a frontal assault, having better weapons, and using 2 hands and even having more strenght overall while vs someone who s using 1 hand should be a win no matter what, like it just pisses me off when i see it, plus the scene i said above where he s also faster than a supposedly faster monster made me drop it, i could explain more but u ll see for yourseld
Lucifer's Descendant System
Zhanye
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Cry_Maker:I don t think that matters does it, let the man be alone, we don t need to know who he is or what he does irl, and i forgot if u mentioned it in your comment or not, but i m not gonna delete to check and write again, so imma say it either way, now you can t judge the book based on that either, that s like saying, "that man went to prison, so his book is bad" it just doesn t work like that, i don t see the need to hate on the author either, we re here read, not on twitter
You confused something, Noah was only able to defend himself against the boss because the boss was only using one hand while Noah was using both to defend himself. The Boss was defending himself from Noah and another blessed one at the same time. The parts where Noah was faster than the boss was because of [Hell Tunnelling] that teleported him instantly. But besides that, thanks for the review, I'm trying to put aside the cliché things, but that's a long way for a story that has only been three days (story time). ♥
I know about tunnel funneling, but that confused me, u can say he instantly got his weapons, but your brain can t work that fast, plus the boss should be alarmed as he saw him using that ability before, despite not thinking he d go for his weapons, also i m sure i read that there are some leftover fire too, from the portal which the boss should see as fast as they appear, bcs as u know, we can sense things in your world, like how noah could sense the arrow, i m sure the boss with strenghtened senses could sense his arrival right when he arrived and despite not being ready he could ve moved at least, which i m confused why he didn t, i mean i know tunel funneling is instant, but your brain can t work that fast, you work as it does, or at least, not in the third or fourth he s using that ability, and yeah i know about how they know how to use their ability right when they re blessed, but as u explained, not many can control it good anyway at first
Zhanye:You confused something, Noah was only able to defend himself against the boss because the boss was only using one hand while Noah was using both to defend himself. The Boss was defending himself from Noah and another blessed one at the same time. The parts where Noah was faster than the boss was because of [Hell Tunnelling] that teleported him instantly. But besides that, thanks for the review, I'm trying to put aside the cliché things, but that's a long way for a story that has only been three days (story time). ♥
Also i guess imma read that chapter again, i thought the boss was using 2 hands not noah, as u even said his weapon"s" hit his weapon and destroyed it which then noah let go and used his flame, but still even with 1 hand u can t be surprised for that long to not use the other, especially since he knew noah had flames as he saw him before
The boss was using 2,but noah was using 2 too, so that was a mistake on me, but he still reacted faster than the boss as he just teleported and instantly defended himself (which it was also the first time he was using his ability), and what do i mean faster? The boss was already attacking, but noah teleported then even put his knife in a defensive position. / Anyway, i ll read this after some time, as u know, this is also a way to forget the things that made me pissed and start anew which i think is a good thing as i read to enjoy myself
Cry_Maker:Also i guess imma read that chapter again, i thought the boss was using 2 hands not noah, as u even said his weapon"s" hit his weapon and destroyed it which then noah let go and used his flame, but still even with 1 hand u can t be surprised for that long to not use the other, especially since he knew noah had flames as he saw him before
I don t think that matters does it, let the man be alone, we don t need to know who he is or what he does irl, and i forgot if u mentioned it in your comment or not, but i m not gonna delete to check and write again, so imma say it either way, now you can t judge the book based on that either, that s like saying, "that man went to prison, so his book is bad" it just doesn t work like that, i don t see the need to hate on the author either, we re here read, not on twitter
DaoistwLIhb2:The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
The problem here friend is that he is egocentric and he is so full of himself for making this novel, like saying "I was exposed but somehow I'm still managing to do 35 thousands a month you idiots', he acts like he doesn't know that his attitudes have consequences. He never apologized, he never tried to go to a psychiatrist. Also with you were the owner of webnovel would u like that your site was judged, because pl think that this website is for pedophiles? And which publisher would make a contract with a criminal and publish a book?
Cry_Maker:I don t think that matters does it, let the man be alone, we don t need to know who he is or what he does irl, and i forgot if u mentioned it in your comment or not, but i m not gonna delete to check and write again, so imma say it either way, now you can t judge the book based on that either, that s like saying, "that man went to prison, so his book is bad" it just doesn t work like that, i don t see the need to hate on the author either, we re here read, not on twitter
Sparkz_2695:The problem here friend is that he is egocentric and he is so full of himself for making this novel, like saying "I was exposed but somehow I'm still managing to do 35 thousands a month you idiots', he acts like he doesn't know that his attitudes have consequences. He never apologized, he never tried to go to a psychiatrist. Also with you were the owner of webnovel would u like that your site was judged, because pl think that this website is for pedophiles? And which publisher would make a contract with a criminal and publish a book?
if the book is good, i would not care.. if my site was popular enough, i would also not care if a few people judge it, because many do so already Like, i get it, he s bad,etc, but wtf does it have to do with his novel??? Irl stuff are irrelevant with how good or bad the book is, u are just ignorant right now, told u, people here come to fucking read, not drama, this is not twitter damn it, go there and blame him, there s no point in doing it here.. Smh right now u just look jealous, that nothing happened to him and still makes money, but let me tell u, there s no way he makes over 1k from this 😂, and why tf do u care, are u his dad? at least judge the book if you came here, not the author s personal life, and don t come at me that i m a fanboy, i don t like the book, as in the review, i dropped it
Sparkz_2695:The problem here friend is that he is egocentric and he is so full of himself for making this novel, like saying "I was exposed but somehow I'm still managing to do 35 thousands a month you idiots', he acts like he doesn't know that his attitudes have consequences. He never apologized, he never tried to go to a psychiatrist. Also with you were the owner of webnovel would u like that your site was judged, because pl think that this website is for pedophiles? And which publisher would make a contract with a criminal and publish a book?
actually let s not argue over this, there s no point for me being rude to you as u were polite and then i ll feel bad, just do you, blame him, whatever, not many people would see or even then, would care i m sure, anyway have a great day
Sparkz_2695:The problem here friend is that he is egocentric and he is so full of himself for making this novel, like saying "I was exposed but somehow I'm still managing to do 35 thousands a month you idiots', he acts like he doesn't know that his attitudes have consequences. He never apologized, he never tried to go to a psychiatrist. Also with you were the owner of webnovel would u like that your site was judged, because pl think that this website is for pedophiles? And which publisher would make a contract with a criminal and publish a book?