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Review Detail of suzuki_satoru in Harem Reborn

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I know I’m taking this harem story too seriously, but out of all the novels i’ve wasted my time on, this one should not be rated above them. The plot line has lots of potential, but the beginning is rushed and the flow is awkward. For example, the main character enters a random dungeon room in his adoptive mothers mansion and 1 chapter later makes out with his 12 year old stepsister. No warning, barely any indication of this relatively major plot development. Anyways I would rant more but tbh my opinion hardly matter. Just read it yourself and feel free to disagree.

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Harem Reborn

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You should really read more, but I can't force you to. Thank you for your time!