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Review Detail of flamingmobzilla in Point of no Return

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Great character development and great story line so far, I think this is going to be a great story over time, I hope that the updates would be more consistent though maybe 1 a week at least, also the world background doesn't go into as much detail in my opinion, overall a great story and you should give it a read

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Point of no Return

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Thank you for the detailed review, I will try to increase the detail of my writing for the characters and the surrounding and I will try to increase my consistency