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This novel is just awful. At the beginning a lot of stuff that the reader is unfamiliar with is told and the way it is being told suggests that the reader should already know everything. There is little to no exposition whatsoever. The world-building is of very low quality. There are too many characters and they are all very thinly written. Character set-up or development is absent. The story is very weak and feels more like a description of warfare but not in a good way. Switching between perspectives from which the story is told does not make for an easy read. And lastly this novel is filled with spelling mistakes and has an insane amount of grammatical errors. So overall I would not recommend this book. It is just that bad.

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181: Dark Vision

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Yes, it is bad and this is my first novel. English is not my first language and this novel is very cringe. Thank you for your feedback.