Review Detail of Ullyr in 181: Dark Vision

So 1: Writing Quality: I would give the writing quality a 3 star (Keep in mind that I give most books 1 star), The quality is well enough that I can understand what you are trying to portray, if you have an editor cleaning up behind you it would make it better 2: Updating stability: This one is usually based on Chapters per week, most people would like to see 1 chapter per day written minimum 3: Story development: I would give this a 5 star, the story thus far is progressing at a decent speed. It is fast enough to keep the reader entertained. 4: Character design: I would give the character a 4 star, I think that it would be helpful to give a bit more background on the character, why they are fighting, etc. The dialogue is great for giving us their personality, so 4 stars here 5: World background: 2 stars. As of this point I'm not very sure what is going on, I understand that they received a mission... but I'm not really sure what the mission is. The MC never met the team, so we don't know who is who, we don't know how far away the mission is from the home country, etc. I got the numbers mixed up, but I hope that you take this as creative criticism and improve. I think the idea is great! And it looks like it will be action packed! Definitely don't give up 💪