Review Detail of sleepcrazych1ldren in 181: Dark Vision

So far I really like it. I really want to read more and find out what happens next. Please post more soon. The writing was detailed and really got my attention making me wanna keep reading. I am hoping for a bit of character description though and maybe just a bit more description on the places. It seems like the story is very much so in the moment, but it's more relatable (and easier to read at least for me) if there is description.