I am reader that doesn't have the patience to wait for untranslated chapters of chinese/japanese/korean novel and I already have the ability [Auto-Correct](Max)🤣🤣 so the writing quality doesn't affect me but I'll still give that part a 1 star. Next is about the smut scenes. I think that you don't need to make it detailed everytime. I think you should make it detailed for the first time of each girls with mc and the next time make it short but not vague (like the first smut scene with his companion). Then, there is the part where mc thinks with his d*ck, I think readers should be prepared for that because the TAG already said it. I also appreciate the fact that this book doesn't have the most cliche plot like nonsense face-slapping. Overall, I like the novel and the MILFS lol.
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