The writing quality of the story is probaly the main thing giving it a lower score. It is understandable as in guessing it isnt the authors first language, and it is one of his first works which will result in him not knowing a much descriptive words etc. If the author needs it i can proofread his chapters and rewrite certain paragraphs where i need to. I dont have much experience execpt for about 40 chapters of My vampire system (first 40-50 chaps). Just respond to this review with your discord (Username or server code) or something along those lines where i can give you an example of a paragraph i would rewrite.
wintermist1994
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LIKEhello there, thank you for your review, as for your proposal, I have some interest in it, but since this novel already get contracted, I have to ask the webnovel editor first to ask about the boundary that allowed to share my script with someone :D thanks alot bro, I'll contact you again if i get the ok sgnal from webnovel :D thanks alot, I eally appreciated it [img=recommend]
wintermist1994:hello there, thank you for your review, as for your proposal, I have some interest in it, but since this novel already get contracted, I have to ask the webnovel editor first to ask about the boundary that allowed to share my script with someone :D thanks alot bro, I'll contact you again if i get the ok sgnal from webnovel :D thanks alot, I eally appreciated it [img=recommend]