If you want to read this novel these are the things that you should be aware. Misspelling ~ It would have been ok if there were only a few misspelled words but there to many that you would have to reread the sentence to understand it. Grammar ~ Along with misspelled words are sentence that is hard to understand because the grammar is messed up. Fighting Scene ~ Just skip the fight scene. It's like a 3 yrs old kid playing fights with his toys. Story ~ Just give up! And my most hated thing about this novel is: It's Premium ~ I don't know what made the author thinks that this will is worth the premium but for me it's a waste of "Fast Pass". Don't bother spending your FP, if you want to read this novel just wait until it's unlock. It's not worth it! **: this my opinion and Review!!
wintermist1994
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LIKEill give you an honest answer here as thanks for your advice and critics. I go premium because I get the contract from the webnovel (they literary the one who give me, not me who asking them). and after knowing that is usually is not easy to get a contract (by other author experiences) i decided to take this chance. you already know in this pandemy life become harder. i need money to survive, as i am a NEET its become very necessary. in short, its about money. second, with going premium, i have more motivation to write the story, if i not go premium I'll not bother to fix the previous chapter and just writing this novel as it is whatever i want. since i go premium now,I have the motivation to be a better writer and make sure my reader can enjoy this novel, not like before the premium(I just write with selfish desire before and didn't care shit about it since i get nothing in back anyways). and thank you for your rating, even though i already fix some chapter, it seems there is still a lot of mispelling. have a good day~