Review Detail of DaoOfSkyCleo in Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping
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a good start, the world building is interesting. if there some downside in this novel is probably the mc personality in the start because it give me some mix messages I though he was a bit smart and have decent common sense but then at some later chap, he become a bit idoitic and inconsistent with his mindset, but author said it for the sake of character development. Well overall its a pretty good novel!
Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping
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Don't worry..... either you will learn to do it or you will change the way of writing to you're more comfortable/compatible with. Treat it as experience & improve the quality henceforth ✌️💪
wintermist1994:it used to be for the sake of comedy, but I failed miserably and changed it as character dev. I'll be honest T.T
yeah, somehow, I learned alot in this novel. ima worked better to the next novel i wanna make in the future, maybe i will used different Alias as itsnot an R-18 novel lol. even tho this novel is far from perfect aka trash, but the sentimental value is really high for me as its the one that introduce me to the world of writing :D
Young_fruit_Smiley:Don't worry..... either you will learn to do it or you will change the way of writing to you're more comfortable/compatible with. Treat it as experience & improve the quality henceforth ✌️💪