Review Detail of daremetochoosemyna in Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping
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Noooo... Sorry I cannot stay those dialogues. I get flashbacks from trashy japanese isekais... It's traumatizing... I get it... This MC probably escaped fro mental asylum... It would be best if he was mute though. World - 2 stars. (typical S&M) Story development - 1 star. (We get guy running around and copying skills.) Writing quality - 1 start( Maybe after you fix those dialogues... It will go up to 2 stars) Character design - 1 star( Those characters are 1-dimensional... while MC is completely weirdo...) Stability of updates - 2 stars( What this number doing in this section though... It should be rated only after story being released for some time. )
Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping
wintermist1994
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understandable, tho mine is far more sucky and I'm ashamed yet at the same time, proud of my work! keep going will ya
wintermist1994:thank you very much for your critics i hope i could developed the character of the MC later to became better. i choose the trashy isekai genre because its easier to write as beginner tho hohoho~
Bro, the Isekai genre isn't trashy. In fact, the birth of that genre gave rise to modern fantasy novels!
wintermist1994:thank you very much for your critics i hope i could developed the character of the MC later to became better. i choose the trashy isekai genre because its easier to write as beginner tho hohoho~
