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Review Detail of twistedpenguin in Must be mine

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twistedpenguinLv113yrtwistedpenguin

Omg. Where do I begin? I just finished reading this book. Maybe my review would be little long(?). So here it is: The plot is really unique. Truthfully, I initially read this book because of the smut and threesome tag (I know I'm a pervert LOL). I did not expect that the plot would escalate quickly, like damn. DAMN. The flow of the story is straightforward and I like it! There is no unnecessary scenes from other characters whatsoever. If this is publish in hardcopy, I would buy one. The only problem I found in this book is initial chapters that needs to be a little polish but the later chapters are really good. I guess it's like the author is still finding the right style(?) and they get the hang of it later. Also, I almost forgot the POV of the former queen — that's the resolution that I wanted and NEEDED. Well done! P.S. Author, can you change the cover of the book to attract more readers? Because I judge books with their covers that I almost skip on this jewel. Hehe. This book is really good. This is the first book this year that I finish and I find myself SATISFIED. Wtf, I'm so happy. It's been a long time since I finish a book with a satisfied mood. It is very pleasing. Thank you!

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Nohra
NohraAuthorNohra

Dear Twistedpenguin, Your review made me so happy... i might write a new story.XD I am so sorry for the poor cover, but I'm not that talented in drawing, and don't know how to make a better one. If you have a cover in mind, I will gladly change it, if you send it to me. Love, Nohra

twistedpenguin
twistedpenguinLv11twistedpenguin

*POV of the knight not the queen. my bad. ಥ‿ಥ but the side story of the former queen did explained everything.