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Golden_dragon444
Golden_dragon444Lv144yr
2020-10-13 02:29

i very like your story but I think it it will have better to have Dumbledore do his own things and the mc this tings............ ,.,.,.........

In Wizarding World With Wishes

Being_Humble
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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

Sorry I have to stop here...I cant read a story written like a Chat group...good luck. Reader 1:Well this guy Harem Fan is a d1ck. Reader 2:Yup hes an old guy and does not know all the kids write like this now days! Author:WTF is going on???? Reader 2:Do not worry author he is just some simp that like novels in a standard format! Reader 1:Oh gotta go my mom just text me..................

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DreamyFog
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Very good, just hoping there would be more chapters!

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Oiwen
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LeyMerSen
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This story's development is too fast while it is too slow, if you get what I meant. Too much information dumb scattered in all chapters,and almost are useless.

4yr
Airelda
AireldaLv4

So the grammar and spelling are bad, readable, but confusingly bad sometimes. The writing style is annoying, you can get used to it, but it truly irritated me when you cant tell apart whether it is thoughts, speech, or narration. I dropped this because everything in this story is FORCED BY THE AUTHOR. There is no flow in the story, the MC says something and it happens. There is no way you will have any anticipation because you know the author will give him OP anything for cheap/free. Also the speech between characters is stiff.

4yr
ReMormius
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Uchiha_Tenshi
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I really like the story and in my opinion if anybody says that you should quit and if the story isn’t good F off like just cause you don’t like it doesn’t mean others won’t so I just hope that the author if he likes writing the story that he continues so I know if he does definitely keep reading

4yr
emcuares
emcuaresLv14

I'm giving you a 5 🌟 🌟 🌟🌟🌟. Reasons? Simple I like your work and the flow of the story. Hope you would update daily even if it is only 1 chapter.

4yr
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