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Green_Soul
Green_SoulAuthor3yrGreen_Soul

please remember that i am new to making a fanfic and that i am making it alone

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Reincarnated in DXD with a system and 10 wishes

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Na1gel
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we know else you wouldn't give you mc 10 wishes we already know how the story is going to be from the title

Green_Soul
Green_SoulAuthorGreen_Soul

he still has some wishes he can use if he need to

Na1gel:we know else you wouldn't give you mc 10 wishes we already know how the story is going to be from the title
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pretty much gives away how the story is gonna go. btw recommendation: next time dont make a harem, if you do, make a damn good one, proof read for increase in writing quality and dont fucking give the mc 10 damn wishes, if you want to make it very long and somewhat enjoyable, make the mc do things based off of potential and not just instantly become overpowered. do not do a system administration because those are too damn common and do at most a status ( regular system). again most of these are just recommendations, but PLEASE FOR GOODNESS SAKE DO NOT DO A POKEMON CATCHING PROTAGONIST, we have far far too many of them. Make to proof read for increase in quality, and don't make powerful beings act similar to your own personality though it does not effect overall quality much. and it is completely fucking impossible for people to fall for another just by looking at them once. you can do it, but it will leave a very shitty plot hole with a very shitty plot device required to fix the plot hole. so please for the sake of my sanity and good fan fictions do not make a shitty pokemon catching harem, it is very overused and very annoying, making it nigh fuckin impossible to make it a good ff.

Green_Soul:he still has some wishes he can use if he need to