webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Deshawn_Wilkins_04 in Lo Recant, The Rise of The Dragon King

Review detail

Deshawn_Wilkins_04
Deshawn_Wilkins_04Lv43yrDeshawn_Wilkins_04

i honestly hope yo can try to put "life" into your characters because the novel honestly would be great but for now it seems like the mc is a robot.

altalt

Lo Recant, The Rise of The Dragon King

Bigdaddy_mew

Liked by 1 people

LIKE

Replies2

Bigdaddy_mew
Bigdaddy_mewAuthorBigdaddy_mew

A little more in-depth is simply, MC is a from a dystopian future where the the leading figures are more messed up than a p*do's s*x dungeon. Anymore, we get into slight spoiler territory. And you will get more fleshed out characters in the future, as I really want to break some people's heart.

Bigdaddy_mew
Bigdaddy_mewAuthorBigdaddy_mew

that's intentional