Review Detail of mr_popo in Musician of illusions

A 4.4 because i felt like it. Writing: There aren't many grammar mistakes if any at all. But if we are talking about the story writing then i wish things could have been shown more instead of telling. At the moment i don't feel connected to the characters or the place as the writing style makes it hard for me to immerge in it. (This might just be me) Development: It's going at a nice pace so far and it's developing in a nice direction. Not much to say or add. Character design: Some parts feels off or forced. As his first friend in the academy... They met for one day and he would die for his new friend? It sometimes feel characters have no depth to them. World background: Honestly... I wish it was shown or told more of what there is. Like a description of the academy or kingdom. The world background feels rushed over. (Not the continents or larger places but more or less the places he visits. I don't really got any idea of what his surroundings look like most of the time.)