Review Detail of GodharemZ in Nothing ....to see here

I'm not here to be negative but when you make a story you have character building and world building. You rushed the story and plot way too fast. I like op characters but half of what was listed as his abilitys he's popping new ones every chapter, what was the point of the system ? I guess nice world backround I like how u blended xman and marvel with Percy jackson that was cool! also get a proofreader A bit of grammer issues