Review Detail of GrapeLord69 in Nothing ....to see here
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Im gonna give an honnest review/opinion i feel like to me the story is too rushed and that it should be slowed down cause i was getting lost sometimes but other than that love the story and keep improving and making good stories.đđ
Nothing ....to see here
Roh594
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Im not a writer so i cant realy help in that regard i just felt like it was all happening fast but its still a good story and doing better than anything i could write
Roh594:I really don't know what to do I am rushing it since I really want to start the plot.
Im not a writer so i cant realy help in that regard i just felt like it was all happening fast but its still a good story and doing better than anything i could write
Roh594:I really don't know what to do I am rushing it since I really want to start the plot.
I am really losing more confidence in this story as I get comments like the chapters are getting worst as it goes and stuff
GrapeLord69:Im not a writer so i cant realy help in that regard i just felt like it was all happening fast but its still a good story and doing better than anything i could write
Dont take none of to heart just keep writing and youll eventually become a great writer. Artist never created a master peice in their first few creations.
Roh594:I am really losing more confidence in this story as I get comments like the chapters are getting worst as it goes and stuff