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Concepto interesante mal ejecutado la apariencia del mc es mala no encaja con lo que es un semidios su aparencia es el epitome de los vampiros y consejo que no mezcles poderes que no encaja si no se va a salir de control el poder del mc imaginate q el mc se encuentre con su padre y mira el sharingan, ¿de donde son esos ojos? a menos que los personajes tenga muerte cerebral, no funcionan

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Nothing ....to see here

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Yup actually I was going to remove Sharingan. Since I didn't know what to give and good advice and about his father asks about the Sharingan then obviously he will tell him it is a mutation or he is a mutant and sebas(System) will help him fake it if his father tries to sense mutant gene in him.Also really thanks for the advice was going to remove the Sharingan.