The story is quite okay but the way author write the story make brain hurt by reading it . There are some mistakes but everything is fine aside from no space between paragraph. I won't read the story cause it seriously give my brain a headache by reading it.
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LIKEVinixxVidixxVici:I fixed the spacing issues on the story. Check if it is still there becuase if it is, then there is an issue on your end. sorry about the original upload not having proper spacing, I switched my formatting tool and there were a few kinks to work out
Shadewind:In chapter 3 and 6 there is no space . Also the 1st half of chapter 7 there is no space.