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Review Detail of Ukiyo7 in Golden Falcon

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Ukiyo7Lv33yrUkiyo7

the writing as in grammar or translating wise is not good at all, to the point where its hard to read. the story tho is pretty interesting. the characters are kinda of bad, maybe becuz of the bad translation, im not sure. the world is very interesting tho, soccer being a thing and all, rlly interesting. but yeah, better grammar/translating would make the story so much better, 4-5 stars atleast.

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thanks for the review