Review Detail of Bijay_Singh_Poona in UnReaLiTy

There are some grammatical mistakes and sentences doesn't connect correctly sometimes. It's only a starting piece of story so there's not much of character development but the amount shown is enough to want to know more how the story would unfold. A realistic approach is shown by showing main characters struggle for life by giving up what he likes to do and work for something which mostly never cared for is shown which can be inspiring to do work hard for your family rather than only thinking about himself and a sense of self sacrifice is established in story. Main character has good enough background to start story but it kinda doesn't looks much interesting. Showing present part of his life is good but showing many possibilities of what had happened in his life to make him like that from what he was. World background is not much shown other than place name and it's prosperous, it's still unknown about the places it has, so there are still many things to look forward to in his struggle to choose his dreams again or live a life of regret to leave what he liked. There are some spots where it can be maade a bit more interesting also. All in it's a good story to try, I'll check on later when the author updates it and will give it a better rating at that time as there's not much in it right now.