Review Detail of QATCOD in Return of the Immortal Mage
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Shameless author 5 star review. Even though the first chapter will seem kind of difficult to read but believe me the story will get better as it progresses so please read until the end.
Return of the Immortal Mage
QATCOD
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Although I know that there was some mistake in first chapters and I will correct it shortly but I didn't had any experience writing as it was my first novel so these types of mistakes were inevitable but I will correct them as soon as possible. Thank you for your review it will help me a lot in my future writings.
Ancient_Egyptian:Mr.author...look, your novel has some potential but you really need to improve your writing skills. you don't write any prologue or explain anything about the novel's worldview and most importantly your characters are mostly 1D or 2D ... you start your story with brief details of the MC death and then few words about his family and most annoying is how he take the fact the he go back on time lightly then he just started rebuilding his body immediately...etc there's no substance here at all ... please if you don't re write those first few chapters in a good way then few peoples will continue reading this novel. good luck.
Mr.author...look, your novel has some potential but you really need to improve your writing skills. you don't write any prologue or explain anything about the novel's worldview and most importantly your characters are mostly 1D or 2D ... you start your story with brief details of the MC death and then few words about his family and most annoying is how he take the fact the he go back on time lightly then he just started rebuilding his body immediately...etc there's no substance here at all ... please if you don't re write those first few chapters in a good way then few peoples will continue reading this novel. good luck.
what I wanted to say is that you are going to have a few readers until you get to improve your writing so don't feel disappointed at first and it is better to rewrite the novel after you hit the 100 chapter mark...also you don't need to be a professional author to avoid the mistakes that you made...just read some novels with a similar concept and learn from them few things for a better beginning.
QATCOD:Although I know that there was some mistake in first chapters and I will correct it shortly but I didn't had any experience writing as it was my first novel so these types of mistakes were inevitable but I will correct them as soon as possible. Thank you for your review it will help me a lot in my future writings.
Ancient_Egyptian:what I wanted to say is that you are going to have a few readers until you get to improve your writing so don't feel disappointed at first and it is better to rewrite the novel after you hit the 100 chapter mark...also you don't need to be a professional author to avoid the mistakes that you made...just read some novels with a similar concept and learn from them few things for a better beginning.
Novels that are similar, you say...hm, I don't know if this counts, but you can take a look at my novel, The Mage of Primordial Chaos. The MC also went through some serious tragedy, but it's different from what happened here. And of course, both novels involve mages/magic. I'm in fact rewriting my early chapters right now, so any feedback would be appreciated.
Ancient_Egyptian:what I wanted to say is that you are going to have a few readers until you get to improve your writing so don't feel disappointed at first and it is better to rewrite the novel after you hit the 100 chapter mark...also you don't need to be a professional author to avoid the mistakes that you made...just read some novels with a similar concept and learn from them few things for a better beginning.
Cyclxne:Novels that are similar, you say...hm, I don't know if this counts, but you can take a look at my novel, The Mage of Primordial Chaos. The MC also went through some serious tragedy, but it's different from what happened here. And of course, both novels involve mages/magic. I'm in fact rewriting my early chapters right now, so any feedback would be appreciated.