Review Detail of Hassan_Ahmad_3827 in Return of the Immortal Mage

Umm... btw the story is good but try to make the story look like that its now gonna happens likewise in simple words i wanna say this that work on that part of your story which can create a image on the readers mind. This would make your novel more ridiculous and hence more readers would be attractive towards. By the way keep it up... Aisay hi shugul mela rakhao Shugul ka shugul kaam ka kaam Parho na bs 24 ghantay yehi kaam kartay raho crore patti ban jao gay😂😂😂😂