yuri please ^^ .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I see well her fall in love with arya stark ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No point in reading this if you actually like Esdeath's personality. The personality is so diluted in this novel and other characters have such choppy dialogue that it'd be better if they were mute.

Pls update i really like this!!! But pls no Yuri i have yet to find a fanfic where the strong female lead has a staight relationship, and its kinda annoying.

Esdeath/Arya Stark pls

good chapter ^^ perhaps have alisa/dany go aslo well, kepp the good work ...............................................................................

Even though u are just starting i like the story. I can see that this is heading in the right direction ...........................................................................

Impossible to immerse myself and enjoy the story , the words seem awkward, forced dialogues , these exploits seem like nothing with this kind of. the idea is good but the story deserves a rewrite

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