The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version] Book Review By Graham_Petrie - WebNovel

Graham_PetrieLv24yr

2020-11-01 03:45

I honestly don’t know why the MC is getting so much hate, I guess in someways he could be better but none of the girls in his harem have been touched so what’s the problem? Rather than just listening to peoples’ complaints, read a little bit farther and decide whether or not you want to stick with it.

The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]

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kotarou28Lv5

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Dude............................do you really let your dick guides at this point ?! filler filler fillerfiller filler filller

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LidiLv4

ermm .. seriously man .. do you think while watching the rabbit jump jumping ... like I don't understand why you write to make a harem but so far what you do is nonsense about situations that do not help at all in the development of the story .. **** .. even Anna and Rina you just ignore it without any follow-up with just some nonsense about preventing something .. seriously .. are you stupid .. than preventing isn't the story more interesting if it starts early without letting them drift .. **** off you virgin

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Venom_GodLv12

Lol This Shit is so trash....Dont bother reading it cuz i thought it would change and i was bored....so last time i said the girl masturbate in front of others when she went to that club...and again she went back to do it againa and she was even thinking of letting this dude join her but mc came and stop her...lol the author really keeps teasing readers with ntr...mc is Cucked bitch...

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