Review Detail of Ron_Azure in Acset Series: The Scorpio's Stone

Nice to meet you fellow Daoist, I don't know how to say it. Your way to toss good ideas one after another to the story is like someone that I know that said drawing a long plot is just bothersome. It will be interesting to just make an interesting short plot, and then find a suitable path to continue the story. It is a good way to write. And It will be fun. the reader will find the story is like a roller coaster, and it is addicting. My only suggestion is don't make a plot that will make your protagonist too strong. You will find it difficult to make opponents who is stronger than him. And the story will stuck. It was a fun novel. Thanks...