Review Detail of Alpha_Medic in Acset Series: The Scorpio's Stone

I'll admit that I was more than a tad confused after the first couple of chapters, as time skips are wont to do to a reader. During actions scenes, the combat seems decently paced, though. I would recommend adding a bit more exposition early on to kick off the world-building in the reader's mind. As far as the grammatical errors, those are easily enough ignored once the immersion takes over. Please keep up with the story, and I look forward to your future success, Author!