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Naz_Mzf
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Nice beginning, and I see your talent to bring out your imagination, just edit the grammar then you'll see how beautiful your story is, keep on your writing and expand this world of yours and take people there with you.[img=recommend]

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Children of Light (Dark World)

Spacewarrior17

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Thank you for your Honest reviewđŸ€—, I hope my story won't disappoint you. and~ I'm Terribly sorry for my Grammatical mistakes đŸ™đŸ». I will improve them over time. ... Sorry if updates are slow, cause i am really busy this November.