Review Detail of Danyul in Eye of Ice

Obviously, as the author, I'm giving myself 5 stars. That's not to say I'm perfect with my writing, There's probably an error I missed somewhere along the way, though I like to pride myself on my grammar. I've been updating a lot more frequently than I expected to, mainly because I'm having a lot of fun doing it. The world is going to get a lot bigger as time goes on, though this first arc does feel like the world is somewhat condensed, but we'll get there. The story will have some exciting and interesting developments as time goes on. I hope anyone seeing this reads what I have so far and gives their thoughts!