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Review Detail of Infamous_Fitz in Descendant of Elder Blood (Rewrite on p-a-t-r-e-o-n)

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Infamous_Fitz
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: Great story altogether but the only issue is that the author got ciri pregnant way to early in the story before we saw I any major events other than him leaving them when he was 10 and meting ciri when he was 21

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Descendant of Elder Blood (Rewrite on p-a-t-r-e-o-n)

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Thanks for putting the spoiler tag on!!!!

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easyreadAuthoreasyread

To clarify his review. The MC got Ciri pregnant. I did this to set up the ending of the story, this way I guarantee a happy ending. You guys just don't know what yet.

Hentai_Senchou
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The main character will die and be reborn as his own child. That in combination with the elder bloods space time abilities will turn this into a true reincarnation isekai... I agree that you should have dragged the earlier part of the story out and developed the relationship more before the pregnancy though. :

easyread:To clarify his review. The MC got Ciri pregnant. I did this to set up the ending of the story, this way I guarantee a happy ending. You guys just don't know what yet.
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easyread
easyreadAuthoreasyread

I don't intend to drag the story out though, so this was a way to secure a great ending. This will have a definite end to it. I will not be transporting him to different worlds after the story is concluded. When the white frost is destroyed, I will start writing the final few chapters and epilogue. I don't know how many chapters there will be, but you all know when to expect the end.

Hentai_Senchou:The main character will die and be reborn as his own child. That in combination with the elder bloods space time abilities will turn this into a true reincarnation isekai... I agree that you should have dragged the earlier part of the story out and developed the relationship more before the pregnancy though. :
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basara77
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Hello author. Have you determined how many chapters your story will have?

easyread:To clarify his review. The MC got Ciri pregnant. I did this to set up the ending of the story, this way I guarantee a happy ending. You guys just don't know what yet.
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