I'm guessing the translator was used so some words might be the wrong tense. There were some punctuation errors but for the most part the writing was good. I believe each chapter was it's own story, which is a unique experience on this site (In my experience). The main flaw is that the large chunks of text can be somewhat off putting, not to me personally but some might not like it.

The character isn't bad and she has a good dream. The writing is a little difficult to understand but I understand the premise and can recommend it.

love the story so far, it's really realistic and hard core, gonna wait for next update do remember to update it more often good grammar as well as writing quality[img=update]

I can see all this happening in front of my eyes. And as author already mentioned the book is based on true stories, I found it really realistic. I don't know what I should say but we need some works like it.

Great writing u like how the author is able to write in a way that it leaves the reader immersed and unable to look away And I usually don’t read this genre so it surprised me when I realized that I was on the third page great book

I'm in love with your writing, I dunno but it feels warm as if I'm directly listening to a close friend of mine. Your very unique way of telling a story is amazing it can touch people's heart and I'm one of those who will not be tired of admitting that.

It's a well written tale of how women are avoided (not it a way you think) but in the society itself. It's a cruel world indeed and i'm glas a writer like this person chose to bring out to the world such an important story. Many people aren't used to stories like this and it's a bummer. The main conflict is intelligently written in an unexpected but at the same simple way. Great and magnificent job from the author, great job.

This book took me on an emotional rollercoaster. There are no words to describe the emotions I'm left with. It made me wonder why the world is not the same for all of us. It would've been so beautiful if we could treat every human equally. This book is a great effort, a great first step to talk about the problems girls are facing. I hope there'll be a day when everyone is treated equally and can live their life in the way they wanted. Also, I hope everybody will get the chance to follow their dreams. Dear author, congratulations. You just broke my heart!

Have to read this novel , I really love this novel .my heartbeat in every chapter, the way the characters are designed is great, the young love is always fun sometimes but it's all about imaginations and ;] full of dreams that will never come true and sometimes they do come true. Please update the next chapter. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED !!