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The plot starts off with good intrigue, making me immerse myself almost immediately due to the flow. The character, our mc, is a psychiatrist, who seems to be connected to a ghost story of her own. However, she still treats patients with similar plights to her, making me enjoy her character a lot. There is one major issue: run-on sentences. Now I understand that it might cut back on the flow a little at first, but I believe you can substitute it better with conjuctions or whatnot. All in all though, a good story with great potential ! Keep it up, Author !

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Patient's curse and within

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thanks for the advice, i'll keep that in mind!