Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Patient's curse and within

The story was very exceptional and the narration was outstanding. I can feel my spine chilled for a moment there. The author knows how to create tense and horror with thrilling descriptions. Even there is only five chapters, I know that it will have a promising future. BTW please review my zombie novel that was action-packed. Waking Up In Undead World was the title and was a bit slow paced from the start to build up character backgrounds. Sorry for self promotion, Happy reviewing!