Review Detail of brisingr90 in Star Eater

Item: Star Eater
Rating: 2.6

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brisingr90Lv123yrbrisingr90

wring quality is standard. story dev is almost non existance. too much small talk no development. char design is trash. he was a astronaut and a scientist i guess but never act like one in this new world. overall a good start but trash development

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Von_5371

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Von_5371AuthorVon_5371

That's fair, but I'm building a massive world. Development takes some time. As for nothing happening, I wouldn't quite say that, but that is your opinion. Assuming a bit about his character that will be addressed later. I hope you come to change your opinion of the story in time.

3yr