Personally, I love how the story develops, the amount of details, etc. Though, some parts that are usually concise are made excise. Though, this didn't really bother me, but rather something I noticed. Considering the amount of detail, active work, etc., this could definitely become a film and/or animation of any form. The author did tell me he did write most of this during midnight, so I cut some slack on the writing quality.
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