Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in The second shadow

Some typos need to be cleansed from the novel. I also suggest using (" or ') quotations marks to replace the – and * because it is not proper. Some readers will see it as itchy in their eyes. The grammar seemed good though Kudos! I like the story but it failed me to get hooked in the first chap. Maybe it was not for me. Don't take it as a personal attack but a critical objective review 😭 I hate to be critical though most of the time but it was what I think you needed the most. Well, good luck!