Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Dream turns into Reality

To all the readers out there, care to give this novel a try! Dreams do exists, and the mystery behind it has yet to be seen. I really love the concept of your work. It involves (or may involves) scientific events paired with the current reality. Although Ive only read few chapters of your book, I am already amazed on how well you have come up until now. The only advice that I can give you are you can an alternate word or synonym at some nouns that you use. A great example this is changing the word "Dream" into a "Revery" or astral something. You can even link a metaphor which will make the story sail smoother. Overall, I think this book is amazing!