Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Dream turns into Reality

Engaging from the start, the story starts off strong with a glimpse regarding dreams and the power of it, to the point where it becomes very clear that dreams are what makes the story in the first place. The author knows how to make the reader engaged by having scenes that require attention, as well as meaningful narration from the narrator. Although there's slight mistakes in grammar, such as "i" used for the narration instead of the usual "I", it does not heavily affect how the story is told. Bonus points on having a protagonist who is different from others. Philip has a clear ambition on his actions, and his need to fill that role as a hero. Keep on writing author. So far so good!