Reveal spoiler

Reveal spoiler

the mc after the tragic backstory pretty much just runs around and says hey dude be my teacher, then hey other dude be my teacher, then hey dude be my captain .... story is kinda meh... mc basically doesn't interact with people and we just get a story of mc running around getting stronger while occasionally speaking to what might as well be a statue that's totally okay with whatever mc want's.

Plot holes, nerfed characters, unnecessary word count like songs(reading music includes a music sheet and even then, not everyone can read a music sheet. Authors should know that reading music is different from reading literature). Mc trait: I am so lucky, all according to plan even when my plan sucks, I am stronk

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It's pretty good so far. Though at points the training yield doesn't really make sense. His Observation only improved by a few meters over 3 years, granted, he didn't have a teacher like Luffy but come on now. 3 years of constant fighting torture should yield much more. Other than that, the fruit power is quite interesting and the story is pretty good so far. I wish the update schedule is a bit more frequent but overall it is a good start.

let's start judging this fanfic. from writing i think it is quite healthy for my eyes. but unfortunately MC is almost like a chinese novel which has thousands of chapters. You know the contents of a Chinese novel of thousands of chapters, right? you could say mc is stupid, mc has great strength but terrible nerf from the author, mc is tragically self-made and in the end there is a chance to be strong is a sin so scram writers won't make it strong at least until a few chapters like mc china is stupid. actually I thought maybe the author could make a wukia fanfic on atg or other wukia. for one piece a bit strange in my opinion. the point here contains bad nerfs and stupid mc. I stopped reading at 20 chapters.

the more the story goes on, the further become trash 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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