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2020-11-08 03:18

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

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Matrixkrock
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I have read till 60 chps and from what i gathered, the writing style is rather bland. Nothing interesting seems to happen and there is no x factor which makes u binge read a book. Or maybe it is a translation problem. Our mc is reborn in a village and he has 1 year (can be extended) to make a top magical academy or he dies. He is beither too strong or too weak. Just mehh. Personality wise, he is like a lazy dude who just goes through the same itenary everyday. So much so that it has become boring. Wake up- Teach magic to loli - attempt a dungeon -repeat. The writing style is so stupid that it skips the reward part of the dungeon after completion and subtly explains it in later chps. Come on, watching mc get cool rewards is the only reason we go through the dungeon clearing stuff and u gonna skip that?!! In later chps the mc suddenly does a magic or builds a academic building and dumps all its explanation on dungeon rewards. Its so confusing and irritating. His students also look like 1-d characters due to having no pov of thier own. If that's not enough, the mc is a "Good guy" who cant bring himself to kill people and helps people indiscriminately even if that means getting into the cliche troubles knowingly. The world is our typical western fantasy world with elves, trolls, etc. Apparently humans are not the dominant species and are lead by the magicians and the academies. Overall a slow and boring read for me. Maybe it might get better in the latter chps. Give it try. Maybe u might like it. If somebody have read it in mtl, plzz give me a idea of where it goes in latter chps the comments.

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