Dumb as a mule mc. His real intelligence must be around that of a 7 year old naive kid. Tons of infodumps that make up almost 80% of the story. Most of them about irrelevant things. Simply insufferable. The author is constantly contradicting himself in the story. Now he says one thing and then he does another. Everything the mc has pretty much falls into his lap without the mc doing anything. He meets a random fey and it turns out that it is an amazing one, very rare and with lots of value. If he needs some kind of special skill, it just so happens that the next skill one of his fey gets is the very one he wants. And so on. The mc is incredibly naive and without any bit of pride. Revenge is something that the mc doesn't even understand. He is pretty much a loser that can only stand tall thanks to plotarmor.
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