Almost perfect. Sadly I see a lot of grammar mistakes every chapter, spelling errors, missing commas or words. Needless to say, you can overlook those easily, since it does not impact the reading flow too much.
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Thanks for your review, glad that you like it! I apologize for the grammatical errors in the starting chapters, but it gets much better after Chap 50.