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2021-03-04 05:34

Almost perfect. Sadly I see a lot of grammar mistakes every chapter, spelling errors, missing commas or words. Needless to say, you can overlook those easily, since it does not impact the reading flow too much.

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C0nstance
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Thanks for your review, glad that you like it! I apologize for the grammatical errors in the starting chapters, but it gets much better after Chap 50.

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C0nstance
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YO! Author here, making my obligatory review as custom dictates. To all the new readers. finding this book. I welcome you! So then getting to the point, what's the story about and why should I read this? :In short its about fighting against Fate and 'Them'. To change the past, advance his 'plans' and ultimately plot the destruction of these 'ultimate beings' who purpose is to manipulate the Universe and control the lives of everyone in it. All for their entertainment. The MC is an emotionless, apathetic person who is determined to advance his plans, even if it costs him his life. A person who wouldn't hesitate to sacrifice an entire species, if it is of use for his plans. A person who had no bottom lines in his morality. So if you like a story filled with mystery and a greater goal, coupled with an MC who strives for this goal, no matter the cost. Then I think you will enjoy this story. (think of the MC to be like Fang Yuan.) All supporting characters also have their unique personalities and lives outside of the MC. In fact, each character has the potential to be the MC, therefore their perspectives, thought processes, and ideals will also be frequently seen. (you will understand what I'm talking about as you continue reading, which I hope you would!) ----------- Volume 1's pacing is a 'tiny-bit' slow, but I assure you every event in it is of great significance. (either for character development or for the latter parts of the story.) I know that my punctuations and grammar isn't the best in the first few chapters, but I assure you, it improves by a ton in the later chapters(around c20-ish?). Makes you wonder if it's written by the same person. Updates will be consistent with an average of 14 chapters a week. At lest 7, if I'm busy with school stuff. I hope you enjoy reading and would appreciate your feedback and support!

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I see the potential and think it is worth you trying it. It has not only entertained my interest, but it also hooked me - who has read 30,000+ chapters of novels, comics+200hours of shows - because it felt quite fresh and a properly written, defined, complete book [img=recommend]. And the stars I have given are not cheap, as this story really deserves recognition. So I will talk about this while in the most honest way I can express myself : It's a little rough at the start but the writing definitely improves. The story is proceeding in a defined direction, the events have a cause and effect at the same time veeery entertaining, while the characters feel like real people and intrigue me as well as make me invest in them- all of these make me invested in it. Grammar is relatively proper and only has minor typos, but definitely not a problem mind you. The power system is mature and definitely a positive point of the story. Regarding the protagonist, he is not evil nor good and not as simple as he presents himself to the other characters, and to us the readers. We will slowly unveil his past, the mystery of his origins, his relationships, and the future that he hopes to achieve by fighting against "Them". I welcome you to read it because while it is the author's first book, it is pretty great for the first novel for me and I enjoyed the story regardless of any criticism I had. It has kept me and my picky tastes. The updates are constant and applaudable too. For the author, good job and just maintain the story on it's upwards cycle! Keep it up! For other reviewers, read enough chapters first before giving a review so you can give an accurate opinion even if you disagree, and please don't impose expectations of other books onto this, as those and this are totally different. Try to see it for what it really is. Also. Don't! Spam! - It buries helpful and real opinions.

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