Review Detail of Reighlyyy in Earth's Greatest Magus

This story had a lot of potential. Unfortunately it was ruined by several reasons. In order of importance from my point of view:-writing quality: poor grammar, wrong expression, badly structured sentence. Those are points that made the reading extremely difficult.-characters: they are overall not bad, most secondary character are flat and too numerous, I would prefer less character but more developed. Second is the MC, he's not bad I just dislike him, I think he's really not interesting and he's really slow. I have nothing against that it's just that following the story of someone who's not that bright is not what I'm looking for. Fortunately some characters are better but come on, the MC is weak and slow-witted with poor estim. Not endearing- the world building is good but the story is honestly a bit flat but then again it's only my opinion.Overall it's not a bad story if you like historical settings with fantasy bits. The universe is really interesting if you can ignore the English mistakes and like the MC. I can't do either so I'll pass but overall the story deserves a chance so try it and make your own opinion