Review Detail of TheSilentSiren in Earth's Greatest Magus
Review detail
Writing Quality-4: Story Development-0: Character Design-2: Updating Stability-4: World Background-5 This is posted at chapter 500. Frustrating, Frustrating, and Frustrating all starting with capitalized letters. The author wrote this on the premise of slow development and a long story, and slow development it certainly has. There is PERHAPS a negligible change in the mc that amounts to literally nothing after 500 chapters. Which costed me around 5000 coins aka 100 USD(based on current average chapter cost). All just to end up only a quarter of the way through the punishment. This novel is supposedly going to the 2k chapter area, and I DO NOT think this slow plot is worth 400 dollars(others may). Second, I think the tags are a little misgiving, this is after reading other reviews. The tags "romance" and "weaktostrong" are the ones I speak of. The "romance" doesn't mean anything to the plot and only seems to be flirting or trope situations. The "weaktostrong" part is misgiving because the mc may increase in power level but he always remains the weakling/wimp. Now, the writing quality of this novel is wonderful with very few mistakes and plotholes. Story development has been described above although it may not be 100% accurate as I'm using reviews to fill the rest of the story in for myself. Next, the character design for the mc is horrible in my personal opinion. While I loved almost all the side characters and their detailed backgrounds. Finally, World Background and I'm amazed at how thought out it is. It stood toe to toe with my favorite novel on this portion, as the amount of detail and connections everything has is great. Overall, this could've been my favorite novel without a doubt. Sadly the mc is to disappointing with to few improvements, mentally and physically. The emotional roller-coaster it took me on was not balanced out enough and anger took over. I must sadly say I have dropped this novel. The lost potential that was lost is substantial my fellow novel readers.
Earth's Greatest Magus
Avan
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To anyone who disagrees with me that is your right, but I must say that I read to escape the rough reality we live in, not to throw myself into a long and arduous story. Long stories are absolutely great but when it's because lack of development and lack of ideas for the plot. They need to be shortend for them to be any good.
thank you for the review, i do hope you can push into 600 where the maim plot started to show. there is a reason why this story stay in top 25 for more than 2 years. what you have red was my first 6 months of writing.
TheSilentSiren:To anyone who disagrees with me that is your right, but I must say that I read to escape the rough reality we live in, not to throw myself into a long and arduous story. Long stories are absolutely great but when it's because lack of development and lack of ideas for the plot. They need to be shortend for them to be any good.
Avan:thank you for the review, i do hope you can push into 600 where the maim plot started to show. there is a reason why this story stay in top 25 for more than 2 years. what you have red was my first 6 months of writing.
TheSilentSiren:Hmm, fine you've got me pretty hooked as I don't wanna drop it, but the mc still frustrates me
tbh I haven't picked it back up yet, but it is a good read. The main reason I originally dropped it is because I was rooting for a ship that got sunk, according to comments.
king_prank:does he get any better