Story has great potential. Too bad the MC is such a f$cling incompetent fool when it comes to women. A total John Doe yet he has every woman wetting her panties. And of course, this story couldn’t be complete without the most laziest overused trope, the aphrodisiac trope. I really tried sticking thru it but I can’t stand it anymore. Can’t even write a strong female character without her lusting after the MC, smh.
Avan
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