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Review Detail of AbysallNight in Earth's Greatest Magus

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AbysallNight
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I tried to give the novel ago again, running out of stuff to read, back to 265 where I was, its a well crafted book an the basis that you remove the main character. He doesn't show any signs of improvement he portrayed as naive spineless and cowardlyand someone who likes to read and search for knowledge which entails he shoukd not be as stupid and naive and spineless as he is, knowledge widens your perspective, he shouldn't be so naive or spineless. He bends over backwards for people he barley knows and the love interests, zero reason to do so. And he wants to prove he's special and constantly looks for validation when there's no need for it, it's obvious all his problems are based on him as a character which he himself should realise because he always runs into unneeded problems through trying to help others when he has superficial relationships with them at best, it shows zero realism there isn't an explanation for his personality as yes his Parent was killed but that would lead to either being frightened a burning need for revenge or nonchalance on the fact that yes he's dead let's focus on constant self improvement acclamation and to have a wide variety of mastered professions and skills to help in all situations so that you can earn the lone ranger path.

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Astral464
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I agree if your parents are killed you are going to mature much faster than the average kid, let alone the fact his father was a very high up noble at one point and would of educated his son to be less spineless especially if he was a warrior