Review Detail of Lord_Sammael in Earth's Greatest Magus

Disclaimer: this is my own personal opinion of this "novel" (your own milage may wary). Well where to begin... First of all someone get this MC in to protective custody cause there's some serious domestic abuse going on here. Second issue is the grammar. Not sure if English is the authors second language, but I'm betting it is. Well to be fair the chapters are legible, but the word structuring tells me the author doesn't have a clear grasp of proper English grammar. Which is unfortunate and therefore lowers the writing quality grade. Thirdly the plot armor is so thick you can use it to build a castle with it. This is also compounded by the fact that the MC does not have any quality that speaks to me as a reader. He is a pathetic weak spineless nobody only there to make the side characters more interesting. There are interesting things about this novel to be sure. If the novel was about Silva or Klea as the MC I would probably gave found it to be more interesting, but alas... This is what I am stuck with. writing quality 1/5 story development 2/5 (slow isn't always the best) character design 2/5 (mainly side characters carrying this one) updating stability 3/5 world background 3/5 (interesting premise but loses out because of the MC)